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Par. 6 — The colon (:) implies that the houses are Mr. Schneider, Mr. Young, etc. <br />How about: Many houses were designed by locally prominent architects: W.W. <br />Schneider..." <br />Par. 7 — Meaning of "religious professors?" A mathematician who prays? A professor of <br />religion? <br />Par. 7 — in first 2 sentences: Sabbath school or Sabbath School? (Caps) <br />Par. 7 — Date missing ("From 1862 to 18xx" <br />Par. 7 — "... before retiring and returning to South Bend" (instead of "retiring back to <br />South Bend") <br />Par. 8 — "However, since neither the Assessor's records NOR (not "not") the City Atlas <br />HAS (not have) a record... <br />Par. 8 — Delete the coma after "...in the Horatio Chapin house [,] or IN some smaller <br />house <br />Par. 8 — Last sentence uses the word "famous" twice. Substitute something like "well- <br />known?" <br />Last par. — Did they donate the books to the library to be lent out, or did they LEND the <br />books to the library (remaining owners of the books)? <br />BUILDING TYPES & STYLES <br />Building Types <br />American Foursquare — First phrase (The preeminent post -Victorian house type) <br />modifies "the American Foursquare." The way it is written, the first phrase modifies <br />"The simplicity and practicality," which is not correct. <br />Remove the hyphen between "Two stories" in "Two stories in height," and add the <br />comma after "height." <br />Full -width [add hyphen] porches... <br />Bungalow — <br />Agreement of number: The text has "a term" and "it referred" [singular] and then <br />"bungalows" [plural] <br />Firehouse — <br />Change "corresponded to" to "was designed to meet" the needs... <br />Gabled Types <br />